Planning Storyboard for my Dasani commercial

Prior to storyboarding, I first brainstormed on a loose-leaf sheet of paper, and then I transferred all my drawings plus my ideas to the storyboard sheet. The first scene would have a close-up shot of me placing down the water bottle and the jump rope to the ground. The location of this scene will be outside in my apartment hallway. I will also have another scene of my brother who will be an actor placing down his books on the table. This scene will be taking place inside of the house in the kitchen at the dining table. The second scene/box shows me jumping rope. Again, this scene will be outside. In this scene, I will be wearing athletic clothing such as a cotton t-shirt, leggings, and sneakers. For this scene, I will be using a full shot so that I am shown in the frame. The third box/scene shows my brother on the table writing in a notebook or sheet of paper. I will use a pan to just reveal who is at the table and what that person is doing. This scene would be shot from the ches...